Post by Indefinite Description on Mar 1, 2008 22:28:05 GMT
I have reservations about the later paragraphs, which could probably be seen as excessively angst-ridden and somewhat overwritten; currently I'm unsure what I might do to improve them, though.
Always the same salutation: how drab the room is; how surprised they are. Most of them exclaim it, and the rest obviously think it: how they expected opulence and artworks everywhere, to be treading on painstakingly tinted mosaic and bedazzled by perfectly proportioned furnishings. They're scrabbling for new stories in their heads, to explain this man of legendary cultivation and his chosen home.
My cell is a grey stone box, with a plain metal door: moss, rust and other accidental adornments are routinely eradicated. Light enters through one square window, too high to afford a view outside for any man, and the shadows do not make interesting patterns.
I tell them it's to blot out distractions, to permit my senses to absorb the fabulous sights they bring me with no discordant note from our surroundings. This usually satisfies, though every once in a while some visitor pushes further, convinced that the sage has a deeper secret, some profound aesthetic insight into a greater beauty than I'm ready to reveal.
The script is otherwise invariant: the most discerning minds (besides mine), the most sensitive palettes, the most discriminating eardrums clash in violent dispute, and at length the exasperated world has beaten a path to my door. One squabbling critic sees in a painting's small irregularities a finer grace bestowed upon the whole, another mere shoddy detraction; one judge discovers in the superhuman exploits of Ennevan a bold and aweome heroism, while another finds in the same epic merely the ridiculous. He alone can resolve the matter whom everyone acknowledges as the unchallenged master.
Rare and exquisite are so many things that pass before my eyes: the weirdly sculpted grave-goods of vanished peoples, or the nearly discarded scrawlings of the madmen in the clinics. When the magistrate Deyflor was set upon and drowned in the night, and in the morning eyes were set upon the bloated aftermath, influential thinkers had it that the pattern of the straggling weeds around his fleshy torso exhibited an evocatively primal rawness; and in due course the putrefying lump was brought beneath my nostrils. A schoolmistress and the entirety of Class Three have found themselves reading the morning register within my hearing; I hope I caused no serious setback for the career of 'Kinnek, Laghur' when I advised that only by his presence on the list was this recital distanced from perfect sweetness.
They leave again, and I stare blankly in the half-light where it spills in through my window, and hope that I shall notice no enthralling movements of the swirling dust motes. A day's exhibitions leave my senses exhausted. Later there will be bread and water, incandescent with loveliness upon my tongue; and in consuming them I will stand firm against their saporous allure.
The agonising overflow has been a lifelong risk for me, but it is not mere superabundant assault upon my most delicate of taste that burrows through my conscience. Mine is a sight that loves things it should not love; and within me things have fallen away that should seem most beautiful.
Flames in any city would have done: anybody's screams, and any creatures' blood. As I looked up from the sonnets of Ashel, I slipped from one reverie to another, and away from all that was close, and comforting, and particular: to my home and my kin I was knocked oblivious, madding in the sudden carnage, and at that same time looking happily on and enthralled by my own dissolution in the frenzied chaos. Inferno, wreckage, slaughter: how sublime they were as I knew them, not as the invasion of my people's lands, but as the tireless dance of a kaleidoscopic cosmos.
Sobriety returned at length, and it changed my companionship with beauty: though my shadow as always, never again might she have my confidence. The old delight was tainted, and I feared being dragged again to that godly nowhere with its views across hopeless distances. To avoid the risk I sought out the filthiest places, but I revelled in the panorama of their dirt; then I retreated to the plainest regions, great swathes of repetitive suburban horror, and yet even in their regimentation I found beauty.
It was partly inexperience that led to my second disaster, and partly a conviction that both the grasping attachment of sexual desire and the absolute particularity of a love that accepts no substitutes would keep us safe from that terrible window on the universal. It was indeed the particular eccentricities that I loved, and that I loved to see enlarge and blossom; until my insane love was dead by her own hand, still beautiful in her crumpled, cold perfection. And her beauty flooded into me through every pore in my sorrow, and on usurping command made even my sorrow a beguiling spectacle, until I turned away and inward, and cloistered myself within this cell.
Tomorrow I am to be brought a shopkeeper and a petty thief, who will re-enact a crime for my appraisal. Their custodian is young, I hear, and aquiring some renown as a poet after the style of Ashel. I shall be happier if he does not ask me many questions.
My cell is a grey stone box, with a plain metal door: moss, rust and other accidental adornments are routinely eradicated. Light enters through one square window, too high to afford a view outside for any man, and the shadows do not make interesting patterns.
I tell them it's to blot out distractions, to permit my senses to absorb the fabulous sights they bring me with no discordant note from our surroundings. This usually satisfies, though every once in a while some visitor pushes further, convinced that the sage has a deeper secret, some profound aesthetic insight into a greater beauty than I'm ready to reveal.
The script is otherwise invariant: the most discerning minds (besides mine), the most sensitive palettes, the most discriminating eardrums clash in violent dispute, and at length the exasperated world has beaten a path to my door. One squabbling critic sees in a painting's small irregularities a finer grace bestowed upon the whole, another mere shoddy detraction; one judge discovers in the superhuman exploits of Ennevan a bold and aweome heroism, while another finds in the same epic merely the ridiculous. He alone can resolve the matter whom everyone acknowledges as the unchallenged master.
Rare and exquisite are so many things that pass before my eyes: the weirdly sculpted grave-goods of vanished peoples, or the nearly discarded scrawlings of the madmen in the clinics. When the magistrate Deyflor was set upon and drowned in the night, and in the morning eyes were set upon the bloated aftermath, influential thinkers had it that the pattern of the straggling weeds around his fleshy torso exhibited an evocatively primal rawness; and in due course the putrefying lump was brought beneath my nostrils. A schoolmistress and the entirety of Class Three have found themselves reading the morning register within my hearing; I hope I caused no serious setback for the career of 'Kinnek, Laghur' when I advised that only by his presence on the list was this recital distanced from perfect sweetness.
They leave again, and I stare blankly in the half-light where it spills in through my window, and hope that I shall notice no enthralling movements of the swirling dust motes. A day's exhibitions leave my senses exhausted. Later there will be bread and water, incandescent with loveliness upon my tongue; and in consuming them I will stand firm against their saporous allure.
The agonising overflow has been a lifelong risk for me, but it is not mere superabundant assault upon my most delicate of taste that burrows through my conscience. Mine is a sight that loves things it should not love; and within me things have fallen away that should seem most beautiful.
Flames in any city would have done: anybody's screams, and any creatures' blood. As I looked up from the sonnets of Ashel, I slipped from one reverie to another, and away from all that was close, and comforting, and particular: to my home and my kin I was knocked oblivious, madding in the sudden carnage, and at that same time looking happily on and enthralled by my own dissolution in the frenzied chaos. Inferno, wreckage, slaughter: how sublime they were as I knew them, not as the invasion of my people's lands, but as the tireless dance of a kaleidoscopic cosmos.
Sobriety returned at length, and it changed my companionship with beauty: though my shadow as always, never again might she have my confidence. The old delight was tainted, and I feared being dragged again to that godly nowhere with its views across hopeless distances. To avoid the risk I sought out the filthiest places, but I revelled in the panorama of their dirt; then I retreated to the plainest regions, great swathes of repetitive suburban horror, and yet even in their regimentation I found beauty.
It was partly inexperience that led to my second disaster, and partly a conviction that both the grasping attachment of sexual desire and the absolute particularity of a love that accepts no substitutes would keep us safe from that terrible window on the universal. It was indeed the particular eccentricities that I loved, and that I loved to see enlarge and blossom; until my insane love was dead by her own hand, still beautiful in her crumpled, cold perfection. And her beauty flooded into me through every pore in my sorrow, and on usurping command made even my sorrow a beguiling spectacle, until I turned away and inward, and cloistered myself within this cell.
Tomorrow I am to be brought a shopkeeper and a petty thief, who will re-enact a crime for my appraisal. Their custodian is young, I hear, and aquiring some renown as a poet after the style of Ashel. I shall be happier if he does not ask me many questions.